I have recorded, mixed and listened to the Gloria.
There is a big problem with the bouncy gloria-gloria chorus which I like so much when listening to the instrumental sounds. Now, with voices, the second section (with the over-lapping “glorias”) just sounds too much of a jumble. It does need re-working.
I have regularised the words for the Gloria – rather than switching between Latin and English from phrase to phrase in a somewhat haphazard fashion, the first part of each verse now uses English and the second, Latin.